Encouraging feedback from my tutor on my Assignment 6, self directed project. As always some things to think about but no more than I expected.
He started with the comment that:
‘The project has lots of detailed description and relevant preparation in anticipation of the walking and journey made along the canal. There is a clarity of voice, combined with purpose this project provided you with the opportunity to execute a complex sequence of events that are all tied to new subject knowledge.
I take this as a positive, maybe even that this elusive personal voice is finally starting to emerge. I certainly felt that there was more of me in this project than any of my previous assignments.
My research is good and relevant to the project and shows how my methodology has been applied.
‘The selected images show a vernacular style, meaning that there is a straightforward view. There is a sense of using the frame of the view finder but this seems secondary in nature when compared to your previous work. The status of the image is rather more communicative and in one sense performative as a record of your walking. The aesthetic drivers within the compositional frame are subservient to the ‘context’ and relational aspect with the defined project that you set yourself.
I appreciate that my tutor recognised that for me, this project was about my walk and, like in Hamish Fulton’s work, the photographs were almost secondary. He also recognised that it doesn’t do a book justice to present it online but that once appropriately sequenced and compiled the meaning should become clearer.
‘Coursework is excellent – the reading taking place is clearlyinforming and adding depth to the coursework’ and ‘There is lots of reflectivity and deconstruction of other work both in the visuals arts and in respect to more conceptual and critical frameworks. The reading and texts you respond to have a function beyond the visual for you, it seems that there is much in this aspect that execited you and in turn will enterinto the work at various stages’
More and more I am finding that research I have undertaken or artist’s work that has resonated with me, re-emerges later to influence my work and it is not always the things that I ‘like‘ or expect. For example, when I first viewed Hamish Fulton’s work I never dreamt he would be a source of inspiration for a future project.
For my next assignment, I have been advised to think about how I will present my work making sure that research and critical thinking is balanced with the printed materials I produce. There is a suggestion that I should discuss appropriate methods of presentation with peers. I will have 2 opportunities to do this, a landscape hangout at the beginning of January and a South West OCA group meeting 2 days later. I really value the opinions of those involved in both of these groups.
I have revised Assignment 3 since my tutor last saw my work and presented it as a slide show with the soundtrack recorded from the train journey itself. My tutor liked that and suggests this is an area I could develop further. He also suggests I could experiment further with the transitions of the sequence though this means I will have to look at something other than Lightroom for the slideshow.
My tutor finished with strengths:
- Excellent methodology and planning of project work
- Strong research which supports both practical and theoretical outputs
- Learning logs has new data inc. trips and visits to exhibitions
Areas for development:
- Editing is key, be strategic in the presentation and be aware of how much work is suited for an assessment panel
- Have your notebooks or sketchbooks been updated, do you have prints to show and are they well printed (C-types etc.)
I totally understand the comment about editing and how much work to submit for assessment. In several of my assignments I have submitted longish shortlist rather than final images to my tutor for feedback. The reason for this has been that I was unsure of how my work would be presented and if in the form of a book, I was aware that some of my ‘final’ images might not make the cut when it came to sequencing. I have also suggested that I may submit more than 1 forms of presentation for some of my assignments, for example, a book and a poster for assignment 5. It is about discernment though so I will produce both outputs and then decide which to present for assessment.
The second point worries me more. I have not kept sketchbooks consistently and my notebooks hold a multitude of things, visits to exhibitions, workshops, SW OCA notes, etc., etc. And I’m not sure that assessors will want to see those! Where my work is presented as a slideshow (assignment 3) or a book, (assignments 1, 2, 5 and 6) – all different types of book I should add, I will also submit prints for some of the images for each assignment. Having fairly recently purchased a decent Canon photo printer, I have also sources some test packs of paper and printed samples on several papers before deciding on which best suits each project. My monitor is regularly calibrated and I am using appropriate profiles for ink, paper etc.
My tutor recommended 2 further sources of research for assignment 5:
Drowning by Numbers
1985 film written and directed by Peter Greenaway
The films key theme centers on number-counting, the rules of games and the repetitions of the plot are all devices which emphasize structure.
Chris Jordan: Running the numbers theme might connect with some of your interests.
http://www.chrisjordan.com/