Note to the Assessors

Thank you for taking time to review my work, I hope the following notes will help with navigation.

Please use either this note or the one on the G Drive which are the most up to date.

I have organised my boxes of work in the order they should be viewed from assessment 1 through to 6 and labelled them accordingly.  There are 2 slide shows included in my assessment submission, which for the convenience of the assessors are available on a USB drive, in my blog and on the G drive. Neither slide-show requires a password.

There are 2 main headings in my blog:

Photography 2 Landscape work, subdivided as follows:

  • Assignments
  • Coursework

Learning and research log subdivided as follows:

  • Collaboration
  • Exhibitions, talks and study visits
  • Personal reflections
  • Photographers and artists
  • Research

There is an additional page on the menu called ‘Swipe File’ which consists of artists who have inspired me and ideas I have picked up along the way.

The boxes contain the final versions of my work with the exception of assignment 4, where I have included the draft sent to my tutor for feedback. In my blog, each final assignment includes links to

  • draft sent to tutor
  • reflection on tutor feedback
  • revision
  • background and context to the work.

In the draft version there are links to research and preparation undertaken.

The only item in my submission that should be viewed in a particular way is the artist’s book submitted for assignment 1, where the viewer needs to start at the beginning and when they get to the end of the book, close the back cover and open it again as a new book.

Although I started to keep sketchbooks a couple of times, I have not kept them consistently. However on my tutor’s recommendation, they are included along with some of the experiments i have worked on during the course.  They are not very tidy – sorry, my first job prior to starting  level 3 will be to organise my resources.

My Self-evaluation of the Landscape Course

As part of the preparation for assessment, we are provided with a template for self evaluation on the G drive.  As this evaluation is quite limited in size, perhaps to encourage us to be concise, I have used that as a starting point and expanded on that evaluation here.

Self-evaluation of Landscape Course.

I started this course with some trepidation, not because it was outside of my comfort zone, rather I already enjoyed landscape photography and worried that I may not be challenging myself enough.  My concerns proved to be unfounded. Photography 2 Landscape has allowed me to explore and  research subjects I am passionate about, local history, the canal network, walking, whilst at the same time discovering that the the landscape genre has a much wider focus than than I first imagined. I have also enjoyed researching areas I would not have normally associated with landscape such as memory and the use of text in photography and art in general. In short, I have learnt what a limited view I previously had of landscape photography.

I have become more open minded and learnt to explore and question areas of art I would previously have dismissed and text is a good example of this. Even as late as assignment 4, I was questioning what role text had in art, particularly when presented as art in its own right.  Research into a number of artists as part of my critical review, led to a change in thinking and as a direct result, the inclusion of text in my own work.  One discovery that has taken me by surprise is  that I am now appreciating contemporary and conceptual art, and I include photography in that, much more than previously. This has crept up on me but came to light when I visited 2 exhibitions in Avignon about 18 months ago.  The first was the ‘Collection Lambert’, the museum of contemporary art and one of the first places I saw some really exciting  work that included text being used.  It was the first time I became familiar with the work of Richard Long and Hamish Fulton as well as a French Canadian painter called Claire Tabouret, whose huge paintings of the haunted faces of children really blew me away.  By comparison, the ‘Musee Angladon‘ that I had looked forward to, promising Picasso, Alfred Sisley and Degas, was disappointing.  The way I approach exhibitions has also changed in that more and more, I am coming away with something I want to try for myself.  ‘Outside the Woods of Thought’, in the Argentea Gallery, Birmingham in December 18 is a good example, when I came away committed to trying double exposures, (Guy Dickenson), printing on vellum, (Joseph Wright), using text as an influence, (Lynda Laird) and other creative process that I have yet to explore.  Following this exhibition I attended an artist’s talk with one the exhibitors  who uses literature, often in the form of war poets, to influence his work, (Rob Hudson). I have also discovered that when you show an interest in an artist’s work and contact them, they are in general, very generous with their responses. Shona Grant has shared some of the processes she uses in her book making projects and Rob Hudson, some of the methods he uses to get movement into his work.

I have experimented and taken more risks throughout this course than previously, both in terms of taking photographs and how they are presented. I have perhaps been more successful with the latter and I know I need to keep pushing the boundaries and trust the results rather than trying to control them.  I also need to continue to work on editing, though I found the advice of John Blakemore at a recently attended book- making workshop to be particularly useful when he advised that the final edit will almost always be influenced by the means of presentation.

The best thing I take from this course is the toolkit I have developed along the way.  Ideas and processes ‘borrowed’ from other artists, experiments I have tried, research sources I have discovered and the networks  I have become part of. The South West OCA group has been amazing.  The multi-disciplinary nature of this group makes it a rich source of support, critique, challenge and collaboration and I will continue to work with them as I progress to level 3.  I have also valued the monthly hangouts with fellow landscape students that I have organised. It has been a small group of regular attendees but we have supported and challenged each other and provided a sounding board for our thoughts and ideas.  Finally my tutor has been prompt with his responses and supporting and constructive in his feedback and I thank him for that.

Assignment 4: Revision and Final Version

I revised this assignment as soon as I received feedback on the draft submitted to my tutor, here.  Reflection on my response to feedback and the revision is here and here.

To summarise, I have:

  • Simplified my language, getting rid of unnecessary words, which, in addition made the essay easier to read, helps with the word-count.
  • I have tried to make the review more critical and less descriptive with fewer personal opinions.
  • There was a suggestion that I  could include some of my own work which was challenging without significantly increasing the word-count, although I have included one of my own photographs from assignment 1 as the cover image.
  • I reduced the number of artists discussed so that I could include further comment on those remaining. This was beneficial as it enabled me to explore some of the artists, Jenny Holzer and Douglas Gordon for example, more thoroughly.

In preparation for assessment, I have now rechecked all of the sources of illustrations included in the original version, replacing 1 as a result.  I have also rechecked all of the references and revised or amended some of those.  My critical review has now been uploaded onto my Assessment Drive and emailed to the OCA assessment team for plagiarism sampling. All I now need to do is print on good quality paper, ready for submission with the rest of my work.

Holiday Homework

With 31st January looming as the final date to get work submitted for March assessment I have gone back to the study plan I created when I first applied for assessment  and it hasn’t quite gone according to plan.  By  the  time  we  go  to  Scotland on  Wednesday,  I should  have  finished  revising   assignments 1,  2, and 3 so that after Christmas I am just left with Assignment finalising 6 and checking references and printing 4, course reflection and tidying up my blog.

In fact I have still to finalise 1, 2, 5 and 6 as well as the reflections and blog tidying.  However, I did give myself some breathing space as I left the 10 days we are in Scotland blank and although I don’t intend spending the whole holiday working I will take some prepared work with me to finish.

I have purchased the paper for my assignment 1 concertina book. Having tried different papers from a Fotospeed test pack, I  have gone for Platinum Etching, which is a nice matt fine art paper that works really well with the prison images.  I have revised the text, now in Adobe Jenson and printed all the photographs and text. I will cut the book board and paper for the cover and finish making the  book while I am away.

Assignment 5 book needs to be redone in ‘best’.  This time I am using Fotospeed Photo Smooth Pearl rather than the cheap glossy paper I used for the mock up and have printed at 5″ x 7″ rather than the 4″ x 6″ previously used. I am still using Bockingford 200 gms watercolour paper as recommended on the book making workshop for the pages and have book boards, cloth and end sheets cut to take with me.

Realistically that is as much as I’m going to get done.  I can’t finish Assignment 6 until my tutor has seen the draft and assignment 2 still needs to be finalised in my head and then printed with great care.  I have downloaded the reflection template onto my iPad and will make a start on that if I have time.

I did pretty well with my holiday homework last time we were away and I see no reason why this time should be any different.  Being realistic about what is possible is the key and sometimes it is nice just to do something normal.

 

Assessment application in!

This feels slightly scary but I have just submitted my application to have my landscape work to be assessed in March which means having everything submitted to the OCA by the end of January.   I need to keep going while the enthusiasm and momentum are fresh, this is the best way for me to work as I am more productive when there is a little, but not too much pressure.

So bearing in mind that we have 2 weeks in Scotland at Christmas on ‘mother duty’, I have approximately 10 weeks to get everything finished and delivered to Barnsley.  In my  mind, I don’t have that much to do although when I put it down on paper it will clearly need some managing:

  • Assignment 5 is almost finished. I just need to decide on the final images and get it off to my tutor for feedback.
  • There is still some course work to finish for part 5 and 6.
  • Assignment 6  images need to be scanned in and any adjustments made. They then need to be aligned before I can make my tunnel book.
  • Assignment 4 has been revised so all I will need to do for that is re-check the references and print it out.
  • Assignment 3 needs some re-thinking regarding how it will be presented, I’m conscious that my earlier idea was too complicated.
  • Assignment 2 has been revised and put into a slideshow so that just needs to be checked and reflection written.
  • Assignment 1 is pretty much there except for the final presentation which will be a concertina book.
  • My blog is pretty much up to date but I need to make sure that all of the artists, exhibitions, research material etc. is added to the menu so that it is easily accessible
  • There will be an overall course evaluation to do and reflection to do.
  • At this point in time, it is my intention to do my own printing. I plan to make 3 different handmade artists’ books and a tunnel book as well as one slide show and my critical review, which will also be printed. Whilst I have been practicing the books, I still need to purchase the paper for the final versions as well as book board and material for the covers.  I also have a book making workshop scheduled with John Blakemore for the end of November in Nottingham.

Clearly my first step needs to be to make a realistic study plan, and here it is!Looks like I’m going to have a busy few weeks!

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